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Leprechaun?....

He looked more like a communist. lol

good for a first

This wasn't that great. But you definately have potential. Add a plot, and brush up on arrt a bit, and you could have something good.

Masso responds:

Thanks!
I'll do better next time!

mild adult themes my foot!!!!!

this is beautifully animated..... but mild adult themes???? they had anal sex!!!!!!!!

not bad....

very good for a first flash. but... you want criticism... so here's some tips:

1. add sound. just little scribly sound. you could make your own by scratching a piece of paper in front of a microphone even

2. add a plotline. no one wants to watch flash with no point to it

3. work on smoother animations. the pencil did not move very smoothly or realisticly. TIP: make it rotate up and down for lines instead of the whole pencil moving.

4. practice drawing. the images weren't that good.

5. think of a more creative movie. this whole pencil drawing stuff thing has been done b4. you will get better reviews if you are creative.

6. add either violence humor, or drama. boring flash is bad, but people like violence. they like comedy. some like drama.

hope that helps you! you definately have potential.

whyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy????????????????????

why do you torment us so with epical kiss over and over again?...... its all the same............. it all sucks........................................

Jesus doens't swear, retard!

I find this very insulting. Do everyone in the world with any religion at all a favor and throw the computer with this file off a cliff. Throw yourself off too, if you like.

ChrisNosal responds:

Cyborg Jesus swears. Obviously you've never met Cyborg Jesus.

i love it

comic genius

this....is...

AMAZING!!!! ive never seen anything like it!!!

I'm sorry your dog died

I really am. I dont want you to think I'm cruel. This just isn't a very good flash. But I am very sad for you.

I don't get it

This blows chunks

right here

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